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Jun. 8th, 2003 09:42 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
hathycolGod, I'm really hungry, and I know that I shouldn't be cos I've been on a toasting rampage and have demolished about three crumpets and two slices of toast. And I'm still quite peckish and could murder a bag of crisps. And perhaps some paracetamol, cos a headache is kicking in, possibly due to over-eating. And my scrolling of "Just In" at ff.net, because I need a laugh.
What is actually DISTURBING is the Rugrats fanfic. I don;t object to that on principle. I do object to R rated Rugrats fanfiction about DIL.
And there's far too much anime stuff there. Gaaaaah. But yay X-Men and Lord of the Rings stuff!
But then, that presents something scary like this, which I will shamelessy MST. Because it's all of 136 words long ANYWAY.
Her Bobby This takes place after x2 Written by XmenFanRogue13
I should have known this was a bad idea upon seeing this marvellous little header, really.
A/N I don't own any of the X-men stuff ..if I did rogue and bobby would marry!!
It's X-Men and it Rogue and Bobby. And for crying out loud, GAMBIT!! He had so better be in X3 or I will hurt someone. Possibly Iceman.
"Bobby"? rogue says as she's walking down the hallway.."Bobby is that you?
Mummy, make the scary fanfiction writer go away!
Where to begin... Well, firstly, there's the problem with the whole speech marks thing. And capitalisation. And also the present tense being used.
"Rogue"? "Bobby its me..why are my dreams getting more bloodfull and why are you the only one who dies?"
Again with the speech marks.
Bloodfull is NOt a word, neither is bloodful, maybe BLOODY is the word? And hello? why not EXPAND on this a little?
"Rogue.I..I don't know why but it has to do with the whole Professor Jean Die'ing right?"
Oh, make it stop! Make it stop! Die'ing! Alas, for Jean Grey has Die'd! (It's Professor Grey, dammit)
"Bobby I don't know maybe that's it but you heard what kitty said..she said that magneto is coming for me again and im scared"
"Rogue don't be ill be hear to protect you"
he grabs her hand and kisses it.
*throws up* Rogue is not a big sissy girl, despite Bryan Singer's best attempts. Bobby is NOT the magical Fairy Prince.
Secondly, where did Kitty pop up from? Movie-verse, why the bloody hell would she have the faintest clue about Magneto? WHEN did she say it? Have I missed a chapter here? And what about that capitalisation and characterisation, anyway?
And won't Bobby fry if Rogue touches him?
Well did u guys like the 1st chapter I no its short but I hate typing so if u like it let me no if u don't then well help me try to make it better
The only thing that would have it better would involve a large flamethrower and the destroyal of this person's keyboard.
Ha! I feel much better now, and not hungry!
Namarie! ~Hathy_Col, FicBitch In Training~
What is actually DISTURBING is the Rugrats fanfic. I don;t object to that on principle. I do object to R rated Rugrats fanfiction about DIL.
And there's far too much anime stuff there. Gaaaaah. But yay X-Men and Lord of the Rings stuff!
But then, that presents something scary like this, which I will shamelessy MST. Because it's all of 136 words long ANYWAY.
Her Bobby This takes place after x2 Written by XmenFanRogue13
I should have known this was a bad idea upon seeing this marvellous little header, really.
A/N I don't own any of the X-men stuff ..if I did rogue and bobby would marry!!
It's X-Men and it Rogue and Bobby. And for crying out loud, GAMBIT!! He had so better be in X3 or I will hurt someone. Possibly Iceman.
"Bobby"? rogue says as she's walking down the hallway.."Bobby is that you?
Mummy, make the scary fanfiction writer go away!
Where to begin... Well, firstly, there's the problem with the whole speech marks thing. And capitalisation. And also the present tense being used.
"Rogue"? "Bobby its me..why are my dreams getting more bloodfull and why are you the only one who dies?"
Again with the speech marks.
Bloodfull is NOt a word, neither is bloodful, maybe BLOODY is the word? And hello? why not EXPAND on this a little?
"Rogue.I..I don't know why but it has to do with the whole Professor Jean Die'ing right?"
Oh, make it stop! Make it stop! Die'ing! Alas, for Jean Grey has Die'd! (It's Professor Grey, dammit)
"Bobby I don't know maybe that's it but you heard what kitty said..she said that magneto is coming for me again and im scared"
"Rogue don't be ill be hear to protect you"
he grabs her hand and kisses it.
*throws up* Rogue is not a big sissy girl, despite Bryan Singer's best attempts. Bobby is NOT the magical Fairy Prince.
Secondly, where did Kitty pop up from? Movie-verse, why the bloody hell would she have the faintest clue about Magneto? WHEN did she say it? Have I missed a chapter here? And what about that capitalisation and characterisation, anyway?
And won't Bobby fry if Rogue touches him?
Well did u guys like the 1st chapter I no its short but I hate typing so if u like it let me no if u don't then well help me try to make it better
The only thing that would have it better would involve a large flamethrower and the destroyal of this person's keyboard.
Ha! I feel much better now, and not hungry!
Namarie! ~Hathy_Col, FicBitch In Training~
